Hi hypothetical director, dramaturg here to keep you on
track.
wholeheartedly agree that an important question of the
script and one that our audience will keep firmly in their heads throughout the
play is the debate of whether or not Jessie will actually kill herself.
However, I think this will not serve our play best as the “major dramatic
question.” I think solely focusing on the possibility of suicide could change
the play into something Norman did not intend it to be, which would somewhat of
a suspenseful show. From just a brief summary, the play may come across as
suspenseful but the complexity of the exchanges between Mama and Jessie make it
much different than that. The two get into issues like Jessie’s divorce,
Jessie’s child, crime, the death of Jessie’s father and Mama’s husband,
resentments never previously spoken about, etc. Sprinkled in between discussion
of these deep-seated issues are Jessie’s instructions to Mama for how to take
care of herself once Jessie kills herself. These instructions make up a good
portion of the dialogue and I don’t think Norman added all that in just to have
something for the characters to talk about. I think he made Jessie stress these
things to Mama to give Mama the chance to change Jessie’s mind. This brings me
to what I think would be a better major dramatic question for our production:
“Can Jessie be convinced to not kill herself?” or more broadly, “Can a person
be talked out of something they have made up their mind about?”. Shifting the
question to this would engage the audience more in what I think Norman intended
the audience to be engaged in, which is the dynamic relationship of Mama and
Jessie and the strength of love. These are two people who have a deep physical
connection having lived together for many years but as we find out in the
script, their emotional connection was not always there. When I read the
script, I couldn’t help but wonder if maybe Jessie and Mama could emotionally
find some common ground, maybe Jessie wouldn’t feel so alone and feel the need
to end her life. I am most interested in the play retaining the intent of the
playwright and this shift in the MDQ would assist in that.
“Can Jessie can be convinced to not kill herself”, is a great MDQ. I think it highlights the importance of the characters and their discussions instead focusing completely on the idea of suicide. It allows the audience to delve more into Mama and Jessie’s lives because it asks a more active question. This question progresses the play. Asking if Jessie will kill herself, does not progress the play as well. This question just makes you wait for her death. I like your question more. But I think the next question you asked, the broader one, is too general for the play. I believe it is the basis of your other question, but I just do not think it is tailored to this play as well as your first question. But I most definitely agree with your first MDQ stated.
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